Turning the Story into a Plot

I think of myself as a seat-of-the-pants plotter (translation: I sit and write whatever comes into my head.) I know my characters and have a vague idea what is going to happen in the story (most of the time.) Last year for NANO I wasn’t even sure of the story, I just knew my characters, setting the three main characters were going to share a great adventure with a dragon named Myrria. Oh and there had to be some volcanoes and a spiritual lesson.

For some writers this may not be enough to go on. So you can see when asked to talk about plotting, it’s a real stretch for me. To help myself and hopefully you face this thing called plotting, we will journey through my upcoming NANO project. I will forewarn you, I will be cheating on the plotting as this book will be the second in a trilogy in which the first and third books are already written.

Just a little sidebar here, a useful hint for series writers: Don’t ever publish the third book in a trilogy before the first two, even if you’ve written them in that order. Always publish the first one first.

Now we return to our regularly scheduled programming: Plotting. I know what happens in the first and third book, but I need to make all the connections in the second book. I know all the important players, I know the setting and have an idea of the events that need to occur. But, how can I make this plot come to life? Sure, I know the basic story, but how do I turn that story into a plot someone will read?

My first step: Make a list of the things I know need to happen.

  1. Joachim and Brandan are both crowned king.
  2. Joachim and Brandan both marry and have children; Joa has twins, a boy and a girl, Brandan has a boy
  3. Brandan returns to the path of evil
  4. Brandan attempts to assassinate Joa and wife
  5. Joa’s infant son is kidnapped.

Etc…

There is more but I don’t want to give away my whole plot. My point here is to make you think about what you want to happen in the story. I’m not sure how many things you need to put on your list. A friend of mine, Emily Betts, suggested ten. My theory, as many as you need to tell the story and make sure all those characters get their fifteen minutes of fame. Also you don’t need to have the order of events down in this first step. Just get the ideas down in a way that works for you and then worry about, timelines and conflict, rising tension and all that fun stuff that goes into a good story.

Now that you have some ideas beginning to bubble in the cauldron, what do you do with them? I’ll leave you to cogitate, ferment if you will and in my next post we’ll see where the next step takes us.

P.S. I have to figure it out for myself first. Remember this is new stuff to me too.

Until next time: God Bless and Happy Writing

Chris

http://www.literarygumbo.com

Keep it in Perspective

Sometimes as writers we become so involved with our writing that we neglect other parts of our lives. If you remember from my last post, after coming home from a very relaxing vacation I read a critical review of my recently published work.  This new info sent me into a downward spiral, starting with questioning myself and my work and evolved into burying myself in revisions on another novel. My beloved husband stomped around the house cleaning and giving me grief for not. Please note that this was Sunday and I usually leave Sundays free to spend time with my family and of course get things ready for the upcoming week. So his complaints were somewhat justified and I am not one to remind him of all the Sundays he was working while I was alone with the kids.

But, I digress, this is about me. By the end of Sunday night I had finished with the rewrites that I would need by Wednesday and had recovered somewhat from my review response. Monday comes: we take the girls to meet their teachers and are home by 10:30, I go into my office and write a post for my site. I take a lunch break, clean up a pile of dishes that had accumulated in the kitchen (although I’m not sure how we had only been home a little over 24 hours). After convincing the girls to do a little picking up I take them to the store to pick up a few last minute supplies for school along with some stuff to make dinner. When we return I’m back in my office writing another post the one referred to earlier. This time I end up working beyond the normal time I would have stopped to make dinner. Guess what happens next, Husband in my office accusing me of obssession. We have words about this and instead of continuing to work, I go and make dinner and then clean the kitchen for the second time. After clean up I finish up my blog post and then get the girls settled for the night.

Now to today, we deliver the girls to their first day of school and now I sit here feeling strangely unpressured and like I have nothing to do. Not that I don’t have writing projects, but none seem as pressing as what I felt on Sunday and Monday.

I am browsing facebook and come across a post on a blog I follow: http://www.marydemuth.com. The post: Great Advice for New and Not So New Writers and I highly recommend it for all writers.

Her advice was to keep things in their proper place. Remember why you write. Most importantly keep God and your family in front of all you do.

The message I got was loud and clear: Yes the writing is important, but no more important than God and family. God will find a way to make all things happen in their proper time and place. If I had only gone to Him on Sunday when I first read the review, He would have eased the path and this morning instead of sitting here with seemingly nothing to do, I could have been finishing up the necessary rewrites for tomorrow.

God made a way, I just refused to see it.

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God Bless

Christina Weigand

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